Drawing out the Truth

We dot the town,
pitiful,
breast worn,
hair once clean,
nerves twice tried over,
and underwear
underwashed.
Somnambulist,
you think.
Weary,
rusted through,
used up
and discarded,

but I know better.

We've a club.
We're doing it.
We're chopping wood,
making kindling,
starting fires;
soot the charcoal
of our poems.
We write ourselves
across our days
as our children
paw to breast.
Divorced,
you say.
Chosen,
I respond.
Chosen
to live anew.
We've no secret handshake
but we do smile,
one to one
from beneath our oily dreads.
Do you know how beautiful
light truncates
beneath toil?
It fractures
in grandmother tea light splendor
as we ply to fingers,
tongues out,
to draw out our own slivers,
mini
plays of ecstasy
from swollen puckered skin.
And when we do,
release is sweet,
and it is
all ours,
each to each.

(I see us around town, usually kicking it over the speed limit, trying to inch hours together to get it all done, these women who don't know each other, but who do know more of the other than anyone else might.)

22 comments:

Marion said...

Oh, YES, Erin. Such a beautiful truth you've written here! I see the lot of us, too, online. We dare to speak the secrets in our hearts in our little poems and short essays---courageously putting our hearts out there on the streets to be tire-marked over and over, but also, sometimes, to be picked up and healed by others. I love you. Blessings, dear friend!

Woman in a Window said...

Yes, Marion, I see you. I hear you. Let's never be afraid to tell our truths, in spite of all the rest, ok?

Much love, right back at you.
xo
erin

Renee said...

Erin, my God you can write. What is written on your soul. I think you have been marked.

Love Renee xoxo

Trée said...

Even when I don't understand your work, I still enjoy the melody. I was afraid you were going to leave the online world and that made me quite sad. To see you posting here, to be able to read your words, to listen to them is a gift. Thanks for sharing.

Akeith Walters said...

What a great poem.

Wine and Words said...

Yes, I thought the club was us bloggers, and in a way it is...spreading our oil slicks of truth for others to slip and slide around in. Some have fun with it, some find it dangerous. Personally, I like skating in your oily dreads....GAWD but they smell. Must be a way to wash those things. My dad just told me to read DH Lawrence's Death Ship which speaks to this very thing. The rustier we are, the more brilliant our creaks!

Gerry Boyd said...

keep on chopping wood.

Beth Niquette said...

Dear Erin, you are so right.

And there is more of the adventure yet to come!

As always movingly and beautifully written.

immersion said...

At first I thought you'd said it all then I read what Marion said and whoa! she too said it all.

potsoc said...

Who wrote that one had to suffer to be a poet? My tires will not mark you heart, I will carefully avoid it and try sending good vibes instead...but then i'm just a old man.

lakeviewer said...

There are lots of things I want to say. First, thanks for being You, uniquely and bravely You. I don't have answers, (on my blog), but I do love the dialogue among brave souls.

You're not afraid to describe what it is in front of you. That, is a very good sign.

p.s. At your age, you might be weary from all that life is dishing up these days, but not rusted through and used up.

Count yourself a member of many clubs, as the need arises, as the weeks change. I like the word you describe yourself with: 'Chosen'.

ds said...

I am happy to be following lakeviewer, because I second what she wrote. You, chosen one, pull out remarkable "slivers" from your puckered mermaid skin.

SarahA said...

I always take something away with me, from words that you have written. Always.

wordjunkie said...

Thank you. I needed to read that.

Margo said...

very nice. I enjoyed stopping by here today :)

enchantedoak said...

I come in your back door again, following Rosaria around like a disciple. Wonderful poetry here. It's universalist and rhythmic. I'm adding my voice to those saying hurray for you. Someday please stop by my place for another dose of poetry.

Angeline said...

I love the last part... it reminded me of the old saying "The Truth will Set You Free."
Even though this 'freedom' may bring lots more than you asked for, but the bottomline is happiness... *Smile*

Char said...

Wonderous Erin. Rust has no chance of settling on you. Go right on sliding in it.

Awareness said...

"Do you know how beautiful
light truncates
beneath toil?
It fractures
in grandmother tea light splendor..."

stunning visual wordplay. I love it.

I feel like I've stepped into a place where shards from mirrors reflect pieces of truth we all can relate to.

BEAUTIFUL!

deb said...

I like this, very much. Gives me hope.

Rikkij said...

erin- why do I so wanna be a part of this club? A silent support group. What could be better? Lovely writing. rick

RachelW said...

Like an unspoken sisterhood.